So ultimately, I decided to take a look at my good friend Teresa's blog, overall looking at her blog seems fairly simple, all 3 tabs are easy to locate. Easily accessible by touching the buttons found at the top of the page. Text is usually on a lighter background making it very visible to see with no confusion. Lots of pictures to go with the topic of her blogs and such, her blog pages are separated keeping everything organized, the blogs on her blog page are divided properly so that it's easy to see what is where. The Home page is an interesting little tidbit about her so the reader can get to know her. Overall: would rate this Blog a DOGE/10
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Going through the writing process is always difficult for me, thinking of a clever hook, building off of that thesis and just letting my mind take over writing. I don't know if it's just permanent writer's block or what. I guess just what really overall stumps me is looking for the right thing to talk about and hoping that I don't get something wrong and end up looking pretty stupid. Crafting theses' is something that is really hammered in my head after having junior year be ALL about rhetorical analysis so that was a walk in the park. Really, the most difficult part for me always seems to be finding ways to improve my writing, and looking and seeing what I can improve, I guess that’s where the peer reviews really come into play.
Having comments on my RA and such is definitely the high focus for me, places I know that can be improved because others have pointed out what I was too oblivious to see, as well as looking at the corrections you have made on other people’s papers and seeing, huh. I can really improve myself this way, or hm, this is a really clever technique that this person used that I can definitely somehow incorporate into my paper. Some call it stealing ideas, I call it borrowing so I can get a better grade. In all seriousness, this whole process has really gotten me to look at my papers more thoroughly whenever I turn them in. It’s gotten me definitely more vigilantly aware of what I need to improve on and really, taking the time to write this whole essay overtime has made me definitely really think about my writing plan and how I plan to write these things out, it’s been nice not leaving a whole paper due in a couple hours and not even having started it. What advice would I give myself two weeks ago? Really, there's only one thing I would say to the past me. DO NOT forget to click that DAMN submit button. The story of “How to ruin everything” shows the indepth schedule of our protagonist who performs as a comedian to many different colleges and gigs around the united states. We see the protagonist visually annoyed multiple different times because of failed gigs he has been booked to speak at, where eventually he gets a packed gig and he visually enjoys talking in, where he is meeting and seeing people who would love to see him perform again. He speaks about his ego inflating and the gig making him feel different.
I’ve gotten multiple messages out of this but the most important one would be that not everything will be perfect, especially starting out there will be hardships and bumps in the road but without the journey there wouldn’t be destination. You must go through the hardships of life and what it provides you before you could even consider getting to the fun part about it. The things you have worked hard to get to. Even if you do not feel like going through the days where its hard, and you just want to quit sometimes, eventually, you'll be where you want to be because of these hardships. Eventually you’ll make it big and everything you worked hard to get to will be all worth. It’s written for those of us rising as adults, fixing through go through the hardships of college and life, sometimes it doesn’t work out for us like the man who suffocated in his own wheat, but it should be a motivation for us to learn what we’re doing and fear failure, cause ultimately its our decision how we want to ride out our future. The story of “How to ruin everything” shows the in-depth schedule of our protagonist who performs as a comedian to many different colleges and gigs around the united states. We see the protagonist visually annoyed multiple different times because of failed gigs he has been booked to speak at, where eventually he gets a packed gig and he visually enjoys talking in, where he is meeting and seeing people who would love to see him perform again. He speaks about his ego inflating and the gig making him feel different.
I’ve gotten multiple messages out of this but the most important one would be that not everything will be perfect, especially starting out there will be hardships and bumps in the road but without the journey there wouldn’t be destination. You must go through the hardships of life and what it provides you before you could even consider getting to the fun part about it. The things you have worked hard to get to. Even if you do not feel like going through the days where its hard, and you just want to quit sometimes, eventually, you'll be where you want to be because of these hardships. Eventually you’ll make it big and everything you worked hard to get to will be all worth. It’s written for those of us rising as adults, fixing through go through the hardships of college and life, sometimes it doesn’t work out for us like the man who suffocated in his own wheat, but it should be a motivation for us to learn what we’re doing and fear failure, cause ultimately its our decision how we want to ride out our future. |
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